Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Numbness From Blue Cheese I'm Feeling Blue So I Wrote This Unrhyming And Unstructured Thingy. Is It Too Crappy? (i Actually Think So...)

I'm feeling blue so i wrote this unrhyming and unstructured thingy. Is it too crappy? (i actually think so...) - numbness from blue cheese

Soledad pull my heart
Numbness choked me
The madness that my memory is dominated
I feel less than human
Unworthy of preservation of life
Sorry state of lowest
Crying silently for help
In a
but not me.

Unfortunately I did not react
To call their own.
I do not want to register
My own.

2 comments:

Dondi said...

If you are a little time low, and oh so blue
I tell you what to do
You sit and think about all
Who makes the heart swell up and sing
Then, in the head with closed eyes
Consider my face with all your strength
Thinking about the love that they issue shares
Because, darling, you know I care
Then wrap the love to your heart
And I know you do not belong
Then open your eyes
While the sky is blue

As you can see, I want to save.
Huggles n squeezles
Dondi.

Dondi said...

If you are a little time low, and oh so blue
I tell you what to do
You sit and think about all
Who makes the heart swell up and sing
Then, in the head with closed eyes
Consider my face with all your strength
Thinking about the love that they issue shares
Because, darling, you know I care
Then wrap the love to your heart
And I know you do not belong
Then open your eyes
While the sky is blue

As you can see, I want to save.
Huggles n squeezles
Dondi.

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